The Right Kind of Eyes

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A mini saga about a stick

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The boy went to pull the stick from the ground.

“What a great sword!”

The girl sighed and threw a rock into the river.

“You think every stick is a sword.”

The boy grunted and pulled

“It’s stuck.”

The girl went to help. When the stick came free; both screamed.

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Dec 28

Some sticks can be wands, some rods, some snakes!

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Dec 27

Every stick is indeed a sword! ⚔️

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